The Halfmen of O

Synopsis of the Story

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COPS – CAPITALS – Overall Sense – Punctuation – Spelling

The Halfmen of O

susan ferris has always felt differint from other childen and the strange mark on her writs sems to have somefing to do wif it hair aventure begins whne she meats jimmy jaspers he sends her through a mine shaft portal to another world susan is thrust into a world split by the powar off the halves a world of good and eval wif the halp of the creatures from another dimenshun she must reset the balanece or be distroyid trying

COPS – Editing - COPS – CAPITALS – Overall Sense – Punctuation – Spelling

1.       read and check it makes sense

2.       decide where the full stops go

3.       add capitals for names, places and the start of sentences

4.       circle possible spelling errors – fix the ones you can – check or get help for the ones you can’t